The number of older people is increasing. Some people think it will cause the problm to their countries, others believe this group is important to society. Both views

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What
is known is that elder people have so much experience that's why they are so important for their
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but there are some
problems
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because a lot of countries have
problems
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increasing the number of elderly communities. Some people's view is it makes a big cause because they can not find workers others do not. Strongly believe that older humans do not have
problems
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and we need to society
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group. İ will explain the
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and solutions in
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essay. On the one hand, if the age of the group is increasing, their
country
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has some issues because they can not find workers like in Germany or the UK. These countries have too many older communities and
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, are not able to produce. They do have not enough workers for factories or cleaning folk.
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, they have to pay money and take care of their older humans.
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, my friend's father gets money every month like others older.
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, elder folk have good experience and they
work
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for their
country
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. We should profit from their experience.
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, they can help to look after Children at home
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their mother works.
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, my wife works in a hospital and she can not look after our son but my mother helps us. She looks at our son till finishes my wife's
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. İf do not my mother is with us, my wife can not
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.
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, increasing the number of elders is a big problem.
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, we can find some solutions like the UK. The UK add some worker every year from another
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. They can
work
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in their factory and storeys. In my opinion, if we develop technology; that time can solve the problem because technology can join
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instance to folk.
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