The number of older people is increasing. Some people think it will cause the problm to their countries, others believe this group is important to society. Both views

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What
is known is that elder people have so much experience that's why they are so important for their
country
but there are some
problems
because a lot of countries have
problems
increasing the number of elderly communities. Some people's view is it makes a big cause because they can not find workers others do not. Strongly believe that older humans do not have
problems
and we need to society
this
group. İ will explain the
problems
and solutions in
this
essay. On the one hand, if the age of the group is increasing, their
country
has some issues because they can not find workers like in Germany or the UK. These countries have too many older communities and
therefore
, are not able to produce. They do have not enough workers for factories or cleaning folk.
Moreover
, they have to pay money and take care of their older humans.
For example
, my friend's father gets money every month like others older.
On the other hand
, elder folk have good experience and they
work
for their
country
. We should profit from their experience.
Moreover
, they can help to look after Children at home
while
their mother works.
For instance
, my wife works in a hospital and she can not look after our son but my mother helps us. She looks at our son till finishes my wife's
work
. İf do not my mother is with us, my wife can not
work
.
To sum up
, increasing the number of elders is a big problem.
However
, we can find some solutions like the UK. The UK add some worker every year from another
country
. They can
work
in their factory and storeys. In my opinion, if we develop technology; that time can solve the problem because technology can join
work
instance to folk.
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