You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.
Today,the
traffic
and Use synonyms
transportation
problems are the major problematic concern of all the countries.Some Use synonyms
people
believe that it can be reduced by encouraging Use synonyms
people
to move to Use synonyms
countryside
or Correct article usage
the countryside
suburbs
,Use synonyms
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However
I agree with Add a comma
However,
this
statement but there are other reliable options for Linking Words
this
matter as well.
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To begin
with,Contoll the Linking Words
traffic
and Use synonyms
transportation
problem is Use synonyms
a
issue that all the governments prioritize.When increasing the count of individuals who live in Change the article
an
town
Use synonyms
areas
,will raise the Use synonyms
traffic
and Use synonyms
transportation
issue.Moving from Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
areas
to Use synonyms
suburbs
is a viable option Use synonyms
that
because can Correct pronoun usage
apply
be reduce
Change the verb form
reduce
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
's day-to-day basic travel needs.As an example ,if Use synonyms
the
someone Correct article usage
apply
live
in Change the verb form
lives
a
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the
suburbs
,they don't need to go to the Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
areas
for their basic needs.Use synonyms
Such
as shopping, salon needs Linking Words
and
etc.My opinion is that Correct word choice
apply
by
reducing the number of residents can minimize the number of personal vehicles and lower the Change preposition
apply
traffic
jams.
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On the other hand
,There are other viable solutions which can minimize Linking Words
this
problem apart from encouraging Linking Words
people
to live in Use synonyms
suburbs
.Use synonyms
Firstly
,by implementing Linking Words
a
effective public Change the article
an
transportation
system and Use synonyms
encourage
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encouraging
people
to use public ways rather than use personal vehicles.Use synonyms
Furthermore
,Implement Linking Words
a
effective city plan ,by placing Change the article
an
same
kind of facilities ,Change the article
the same
such
as government offices, medical facilities, Linking Words
shopping
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and shopping
areas
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to
a particular area in the Change preposition
in
town
.Use synonyms
Moreover
,if the government can reduce the single houses and build apartment complexes and flats in Linking Words
the
suitable Correct article usage
apply
areas
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also
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a
better solutionAdd a missing verb
be a
as well
.
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apply
To conclude
,I agree that , encouraging Linking Words
people
to live in the Use synonyms
suburbs
is a better fix ,but there are other ways to minimize Use synonyms
this
matter Linking Words
such
as developing the public Linking Words
transportation
system, restructuring the city Use synonyms
and
etc.Correct word choice
apply
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