You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

Today,the

traffic

and

transportation

problems are the major problematic concern of all the countries.Some

people

believe that it can be reduced by encouraging

people

to move to

countryside

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the countryside

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or

suburbs

,

However

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However,

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I agree with

this

statement but there are other reliable options for

this

matter as well.

To begin

with,Contoll the

traffic

and

transportation

problem is

a

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an

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issue that all the governments prioritize.When increasing the count of individuals who live in

town

areas

,will raise the

traffic

and

transportation

issue.Moving from

town

areas

to

suburbs

is a viable option

that

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apply

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because can

be reduce

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reduce

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the

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apply

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people

's day-to-day basic travel needs.As an example ,if

the

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apply

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someone

live

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lives

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in

a

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the

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suburbs

,they don't need to go to the

town

areas

for their basic needs.

Such

as shopping, salon needs

and

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apply

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etc.My opinion is that

by

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apply

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reducing the number of residents can minimize the number of personal vehicles and lower the

traffic

jams.

On the other hand

,There are other viable solutions which can minimize

this

problem apart from encouraging

people

to live in

suburbs

.

Firstly

,by implementing

a

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an

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effective public

transportation

system and

encourage

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encouraging

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people

to use public ways rather than use personal vehicles.

Furthermore

,Implement

a

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an

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effective city plan ,by placing

same

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the same

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kind of facilities ,

such

as government offices, medical facilities,

shopping

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and shopping

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areas

to

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in

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a particular area in the

town

.

Moreover

,if the government can reduce the single houses and build apartment complexes and flats in

the

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apply

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suitable

areas

also

a

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be a

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better solution

as well

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apply

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.

To conclude

,I agree that , encouraging

people

to live in the

suburbs

is a better fix ,but there are other ways to minimize

this

matter

such

as developing the public

transportation

system, restructuring the city

and

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apply

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etc.