An English-speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Offer to find a place for him / her to live • Give advice about how to find a part-time job • Give information on where he / she can learn your language

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Dear Bob, How're you, my friend? How's the family? We haven't met since we got together

last

year. Hope things are OK at your end. I've just got your letter, and I'm writing to help you with your accommodation, work matters, and the best way to learn the Arabic language. The first thing I want to tell you about is that

this

is a great step to come to study in my city, which has the most reputed universities in the country,

Therefore

, I can help you find a suitable house to live in as I have many connections with real estate companies. Let me tell you that you need to find part-time work to assist you with living costs. Fortunately, I've gone through a job as a salesman at my company, which I think is suitable for you as you are a good negotiator. Another thing I forgot to mention is that learning the Arabic language is quite essential nowadays, so I recommend you to join Cairo University, which has highly qualified teachers. I hope

this

will serve you, and if you need any help, don't hesitate to contact me. Please, say hi to your beloved family. Lots of love, Islam

Submitted by drislam999 on Sun Sep 24 2023

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