The table below shows key data on the demographics of four different countries.
The table depicts the information on the demographics of the
USA
, UK
, Russia
and China
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the population of China
was the highest, while
the UK
was the lowest.
Moreover
, the average life expectancy was the biggest in the UK
, whereas
the smallest was in the USA
.
To begin
with, the population of China
accounted for 1,357,000,000 which is ten times bigger than Russia
( 143, 986,000). The figure for the USA
accounted for 318,875,000 people, whereas
UK
only 64, 937,000. In terms of GDP per capita, China
had roughly 6,807 which is over 2 times smaller than Russia
( 14, 987). Moreover
, the USA
obtained namely 53, 681 , while
the UK
only
(41,787).
With regards to average life expectancy, the UK
had approximately 81.5 , while
the USA
obtained only 69.2. However
, the statistics of China
and Russia
were approximately similar 75,2 and 72,3.Submitted by dimash171206 on
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