The bar chart below shows the hour per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007

The bar chart below shows the hour per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007
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The diagram illustrates the number of hours per week that youths spent participating across seven enterprises in Chester from 2002 until 2007.
Overall
, the histogram demonstrates the three activities out of seven that gained favourable over six-year periods, contrary to the rest four domains that are less popular throughout the reporting period. Observing the details, it is remarkable that there was a dramatic rise in younger generations participating in watching TV, increasing from 25% in 2002 to 38% in 2007. Comparably, teens spent time on clubbing and shopping which grew gradually three times more than it was in 2002.
On the contrary
, the rest four enterprises demonstrated the reduction. Noticeably, teenagers spending time watching DVDs slightly increased to around 18% in 2004 and 2005 but unfortunately fell to 10% in 2007. Considering that doing homework and sports slowly declined till 2007. Interestingly, bowling remained the least favourite domain with only 4% of youths joining and just 1% taking part in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • compare and contrast
  • increase/decrease
  • time allocation
  • shifts in popularity
  • significant changes
  • cultural factors
  • technological advancements
  • social dynamics
  • implications
  • physical/mental health
  • social development
  • leisure activities
  • recreational
  • sedentary
  • engagement
  • interaction
  • steadily
  • dramatically
  • marginally
  • consistently
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