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Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary schools .do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is considered by some professionals that studying a new
language
 at primary
schools
 is
paramount
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 importance
instead
 of learning it in secondary
schools
.
This
 essay will explore how it offers a lot of chances to study that
language
 effectively and easily
while
 it decreases
sense
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the sense
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 of own
cultures
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culture
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 and traditions .In my opinion,
benefits
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the benefits
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 of learning a second
language
 at primary
schools
 outweigh the drawbacks of
this
 view. On the one hand , studying another
language
 at
very
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 young
age
 is extremely advantageous to learners to obtain significant opportunities to practice and comprehend that
language
 effectively. Since they are carefree and they have
high
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 capacity in their brains to grasp novel information at that
age
 , they learn another
language
 very effectively and easily.Children learn
advance
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 vocabularies and sentence patterns which are included in new
language
 as their brains are fresh at
young
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age
.For
an
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example, at present, a multitude of students speak
English
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the English
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language
 more eloquently rather than adults because school children are taught English
at
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in
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 their primary education and , they are able to practice
those
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that language
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language
 with their peers at
schools
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school
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.
Therefore
, since they will speak those languages fluently in the future, they will gain prestigious
employments
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employment
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in
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overseas very easily.
On the other hand
, learning a new
language
 at adolescence
age
 is disadvantageous to students since it decreases the sense of their own
culture
 and tradition.As they learn other languages , they are drawn to various types of cultures and nations .
Consequently
, they do not prefer to learn their own
culture
 , and they tend to follow another
culture
 and tradition.
Therefore
, they will not
able
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 to pass down their heritage and beliefs to the next generation.
As a result
 , it might lead to vanish their local civilizations significantly. For
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instance, children who study at International
schools
 in Sri Lanka tend to wear
western
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 outfits and follow
western
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culture
instead
 of Sri Lankan
culture
. I'm conclusion,
although
 studying a foreign
language
at
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in
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 primary education
instead
 of secondary education diminishes the sense of patriotism towards their nations , it provides considerable opportunities to practice
new
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language
 effectively.
Hence
, the positive impacts of studying a second
language
at
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primary
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the primary
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 school curriculum outweigh the negative impacts of it.
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