Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Language
is a universal thing to learn.
Now-a-days
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anyone can learn any
language
besides
native speakers. A section of
population
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the population
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opines that
,
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apply
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people
accquire
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acquire
knowledge
about other
languages
so that they can roam around the world and have
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a job
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job
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jobs
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in
other region
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another region
other regions
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.
Whereas
some think there are other motives behind
learing
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learning
foreign
languages
. I
competely
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completely
disagree with
this
idea and in
this
essay
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I will discuss my opinion with examples.
To begin
with, if you someone wants to about other
country
's culture must know the
language
. Knowing
other's
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another's
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native
tounge
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tongue
enhance
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enhances
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the
knowledge
about the
country
,
people
and culture.
Eventhough
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Even though
, in my own
country
I can be valued by knowing other
languages
. One of my
friend
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friends
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,
for instance
, know Chinese very well. He earned his
post graduation
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post-graduation
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dgree
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degree
from China. He learnt their
language
,
culture
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and culture
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and
then
came back to his motherland. Now, he is working in a Chinese firm. As
,
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many Chinese
people
work in our
country
without knowing our mother
tounge
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tongue
, so he
work
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works
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as
a
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interpreter.
In addition
to that, he is now sharing his
knowledge
with his friends and family. Twice
in
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a week without any
fees
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he is taking
class
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classes
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online.
In contrast
,
initially
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,initially
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some
people
learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
to have
the
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a
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foreign
employeement
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employment
opportunity or visit
the
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different
country
but at
last
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they come back to Bangladesh and
stays
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stay
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here forever.
For example
, my elder brother learnt
french
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not to
got
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get
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France but
improve
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to improve
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his quality. After
finished
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finishing
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his course he went to Canada for higher studies. French give him additional
benefit
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benefits
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but not everything.
Then
he returned to Bangladesh and started his career as an Engineer.
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Even
,
sometimes
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though sometimes
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he still
go
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back to Canada for his vacation
but
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he never thought
to work
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of working
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their
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permanently. On the basis of
above
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the above
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discussion, I believe that roaming the world by
learing
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learning
different
languages
or having a job are not the main reasons to learn foreign
languages
. Some
people
wants
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want
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to share their
knowledge
, some
people
wants
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want
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to learn
lanuages
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languages
so that they can
persue
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pursue
their studies.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
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