The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.

The chart and  table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.
The bar chart and table provide information about how many people live in Japan.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the proportion of the total
population
will be highest in 2055 ,
while
in 1950 was the lowest.
Moreover
, the
population
of millions of people in Japan will be the largest,
whereas
in 1950 was the smallest.
To begin
with
population
( millions) , accounted for 84.1 which rose gradually to 104,6 in 1970.
Therefore
, it showed a negligible increase to 123,6 in 1990 and maintained the same level during the next 15 years . It is predicted that it will drop significantly to 110 in 2035 and,
therefore
89,9 in 2055. With regards to over-65s, the
population
( million) in 2005 was 25,7 which is over 6 times larger than in 1950 (4.1).
Consequently
, in 2035 and 2055 there will be shared similar numbers, namely 37.2 and 36.5 roughly. In terms of percentage of the
population
, it accounted for 20 % in 2005 twice as much as in 2055 (41%).
Furthermore
, the proportion of the public will be 34 % in 2035,
whereas
in 1950 was only 4.9%
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