Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is argued that

culture

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receive

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income can

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easily

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negative

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, there are others who hold the opinion that it is the only solution to save the

culture

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. Both perspectives hold valid justifications,

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, I find myself inclining towards the latter stance. One key

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is that the number of tourists is one of the

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reason

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that lead to

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disintegration of the

culture

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. Tourists tend to harm the environment because of their

interested

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, nowadays,

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would like

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wildlife safari,

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of that, lots of

safari

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were opened to satisfy

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, it lead to the disturbance of animals's life and have a detrimental effect on the life cycle of the environment.

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, there are

people

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who hold the view that mass

tourism

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is one of the best

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to save traditional values. The reason is that the finance that

tourism

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gained can be used to rectify the problems of

cutural

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cultural

heritages.

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, the profit of

tourism

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can be applied

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refurbishment of

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temples,

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castles and so on. Another

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reason is that

tourism

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help

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to increase the revenue generation of the nation , so that it would be more grant to reinvest in the

culture

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of ethnic. In conclusion,

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both viewpoints present valid reasons and can be justified. I think that

people

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should develop

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tourists

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activities to gain enough finance to maintain our cultural values.