The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The need for processed
food
has increased in daily life and a lot of people
who suffer from a lack of time
tend to use these types of food
. There are some benefits as saving time
and not losing energy while
there are some drawbacks such
as being obese and suffering from indigestion problems which outweigh the advantages.
First of all, The main advantage of consuming convenience food
is saving time
. Most people
after work can not manage time
for their own personal lives and spend more time
cooking, however
, buying precooked meals saves time
of people
. Secondly
, people
do not lose their energy and use this
for other work. For example
, people
can have some hobbies such
as painting, riding bikes, and going to the gym instead
of cooking. Thus
, many people
prefer to eat fast food
.
Although
there are some positive sides of
using takeaway Change preposition
to
food
, the negative sides of this
are so dangerous. The composition of processed food
is unknown, a lot of sugar, palm oil, and some colorful
ingredients added to processed Change the spelling
colourful
food
can bring about an increase in the number of obese people
. Additionally
, these kinds of food
do not carry some vitamins important for the human body and people
can face indigestion problems more often. For instance
, fast food
is frequently consumed by people
who have a sedentary lifestyle and eat a lot but do not exercise. Therefore
, these people
like to consume junk food
and are not healthy.
To conclude
, convenience food
is preferable to people
owing to saving time
and energy. In spite of the advantages of these types of food
, it is more disadvantageous because precooked food
leads to indigestion problems and obesity.Submitted by zuleykhaaliyeva223 on
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