Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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critical issue, some experts say we should spend more money on

trains

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rather than roads. In my personal, opinion, I definitely agree with

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notion, and the following content will list the reasons. Enhancing the

quality

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of

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can benefit more citizens than roads. During

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time

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work, there

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always

abundance

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of cars and vehicles jammed on the road,

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, in the train station, people can use

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effective way to reach

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destination without

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suffering

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from a crowded journey.

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, in

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situation, the station only

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to add more

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in

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the

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especial

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time of the day

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the problem can be solved easily.

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of public transportation is an eco-friendly way. The

pollution

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and the

quality

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of

life

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have been a vital issue for the locals. The consequences of overusing

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cars,

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as air

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, emission of carbon dioxide, noise

pollution

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and the waste during manufacturing process

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are always be

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point

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out as the main

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to decrease

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locals’

quality

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of

life

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.

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,

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can not only

faster

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than

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car

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but

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produce less waste and

pollution

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than cars, which can give people in local areas a better

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. In conclusion,

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convenience and

eco-friendly

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eco-friendliness

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are the main

reason

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why I support

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more funds in the railways,

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investment can not only let our money

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use

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in an efficient way but

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can give us a better

quality

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of

life

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.