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Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. To what extent do you agree?

#people #life #skill #boys #girls #schools #waste #school #time
Nowadays people like to order
meal
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meals
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 not cooking by themselves.
Especially the
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 most of them prefer fast
food
 much more
such
 as
mcdonalds
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McDonald's
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 or
kfc
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KFC
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, dominos etc. They think that making
food
 is
really
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a really
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 difficult process.
The modern
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 parents think that cooking isn'
t
 essential for
children
,
however
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 the parents don'
t
 know if their
children
 can cook the meal they will be more independent and
cabable
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capable
 than other
children
 even
the
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adults, so teaching cooking
skill
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skills
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 to
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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 is so necessary for their lives.
Firstly
 when
children
 return
to
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home they cannot find homemade
meal
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meals
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. The
contemperary
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contemporary
 parents work and
the
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most of them don'
t
 have enough time to cook
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a meal
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meal
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meals
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 for their
children
.
Then
children
 were forced to eat junk or fast
food
.
This
 affects their health so badly. If the
children
 can learn cooking
skill
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skills
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 when they come back from
school
 they can make
food
 for
them
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themselves
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.
Secondly
 the subjects of
school
maybe
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may be
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 boring or exhausting for
the
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most
of
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students. When they cannot find interesting
activty
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activity
 in
the
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school
 they want to leave
school
 as soon as possible.
Also
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 it influences their motivation and success in education. Even if they have cooking
activity
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activities
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 in the class they can spend interesting time in the
school
 and it will affect their motivation
of
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for
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 learning. In
conclusion
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 cooking
skill
 is
invalubale
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invaluable
 for humans. If we don'
t
 eat homemade
food
 it will
affects
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 our health.
That is
 why all people
as well as
children
 must know how to cook.
Therefore
 cooking
skill
 should be
thought
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 to
children
 in
the
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apply
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school
.
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