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Many people work long hours, lesving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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There are many people who tend to more
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 at effort and spend a short
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 in their free
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, in my opinion, there are some advantages for them and they employ your life was more disadvantages for their speciality.
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, spending
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 in leisure activities can help people to increase their applicability, but many of them avoid considering it. On the one hand, they do not identify it as more useful for their employer than themselves. it is that, when their employer observes their employee prefer to stay at
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 or want to have short
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 for their leisure
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, surely they would be more satisfied. Because, doing the plants of their company would be sooner, because of attendance their co-worker permanently at
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 or break the
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work
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 shortly.
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, one main benefit for employees is the more
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 at
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, the higher the salary and income.
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, these kinds of co-workers are more popular with their employers, because of lower their requests in furlough. From
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 point of view, these benefits are unavailable to employees
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 employers.
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, attention to the advantages of less
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 in free
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 can be considered in their consequences on co-workers 'co worker's lifestyles. These days, having some entertainment is so crucial for everyone, especially, those who have hard
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 or a lot times
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. Because their health is related to the methods that they use in their
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 or life.
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, lack of leisure or considered short
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 for it can increase health problems,
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 as depression, disappointment and develop some pins in their body. It means
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 we can encourage and persevere our physical and mental by planning sufficient
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 in during our
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 of
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.
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, spending a long
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 near a gorgeous beach or climbing a magnificent mountain even though playing with our family in a happy picnic in a jungle. In my opinion, reducing free
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activity
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 can be harmful to our healthy lifestyle. So, if we consider its consequences , our lives and
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 would be more satisfied. In conclusion, ignoring the effects of free
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activity
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 in life and
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 would prevent innovation and creative co-workers
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • stress relief
  • productivity
  • economic growth
  • career progression
  • skill enhancement
  • quality time
  • financial security
  • leisure activities
  • physical health
  • personal relationships
  • stress-related illnesses
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