The diagram below provides the propotion of tourists to England visiting four various attractions in Bringhton.

The diagram below provides the propotion of tourists to England visiting four various attractions in Bringhton.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below provides the propotion of tourists to England visiting four various attractions in Bringhton.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of England tourists who visited the Art Gallery, the Pavilion , the Pier and the Festival from Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
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while
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the number of individuals visiting the Pavilion ,the Art Gallery and the Pier encountered significant variations in the given period, the proportion of tourists going to the Festival remained approximately the same.
Firstly
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, starting with the attractions that have had the biggest variations , the proportion of England visitors who went to the Galery started at over 20% ,reached its peak in 1985, nearly 40%, and
then
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dropped dramatically until 2010, to less than 10%. The other artefact,the Pavilion started from more than 20% in 1980, reached its maximum of nearly 50% in 1995 and
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decreased to 30%,
additionally
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becoming the most visited attraction in 2010.
Next,
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continuing with the artefacts that have not had significant changes , the percentage of England tourists who visited the Pier started from 10% at the beginning of the period and became 20%
at the end
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. The number of Festival participants remained constant in all years, with small deviations of around 30%.

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