The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words

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The given map represents information about public libraries in 2003 and two decades later.

Overall

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, there are a lot of huge changes on all sides of the charts,

moreover

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, the central library has been modified.

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, some rooms increased in size, and some were removed. It can be clearly seen that the left upper and right bottom corners changed fully.

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, computer games,videos and so on changed for storytelling events and children’s fiction

books

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moreover

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, there were two sofas for more comfort.

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, the enquiry desk was changed to the cafe,

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both places changed their forms, and the square metres uplifted,

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, tables and chairs were removed from the centre. It is obvious that places

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as the lecture room and computer room changed insides,

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, the outside almost did not change. Only the door was changed to the left of the entrance. It is interesting to note that in the past the right and left side of the centre was used for adult fiction

books

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and non-fiction

books

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, but nowadays time has changed and on the ,left there are all the reference

books

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, and on the ,right there are technologies

such

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as information desk, self-service machines and so on.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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