The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words
The given map represents information about public libraries in 2003 and two decades later.
Overall
, there are a lot of huge changes on all sides of the charts, moreover
, the central library has been modified. In addition
, some rooms increased in size, and some were removed.
It can be clearly seen that the left upper and right bottom corners changed fully. For instance
, computer games,videos and so on changed for storytelling events and children’s fiction books
, moreover
, there were two sofas for more comfort. Furthermore
, the enquiry desk was changed to the cafe, also
both places changed their forms, and the square metres uplifted, besides
, tables and chairs were removed from the centre.
It is obvious that places such
as the lecture room and computer room changed insides, however
, the outside almost did not change. Only the door was changed to the left of the entrance.
It is interesting to note that in the past the right and left side of the centre was used for adult fiction books
and non-fiction books
, but nowadays time has changed and on the ,left there are all the reference books
, and on the ,right there are technologies such
as information desk, self-service machines and so on.Submitted by dimash171206 on
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