The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram depicts the

process

of manufacturing construction

broicks

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bricks

Overall

, it is noticeable that there are 7 main stages to

produce

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producing

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broicks

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bricks

which start

from

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with

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digger and clay and end with delivery.

In addition

, only

first

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the first

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stage

require

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requires

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mannual

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manual

work where

people

hard

working

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apply

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while

other processes can be done

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with

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different equipment.

To begin

with

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,with

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digger

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diggers

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, where

people

put a lot of effort

to find

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into finding

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them

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therefore

they

are

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apply

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found the clay which was sent to

roller

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the roller

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Subsequently

this

process

will require a durable time as

people

should

waite

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wait

to achieve a metal grid.

Moreover

, it is linked with sand and water

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and,therefore

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therefore

transported to make a wire cutter or mould. The next phase of

this

process

is called drying when

people

dry it

with

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for

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over

between

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apply

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48 hours.

Consequently

, it is sent to

kiin

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kiln

kin

to heat

with

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apply

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moderately, high and after

they

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the

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cooling chamber from 48 to 72 hours. Following that they start to package ready

broicks

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bricks

. Ultimately, it

ready

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is ready

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for delivery and will have

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apply

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good sales.

However

this

process

are

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repeated again as soon as

people

will start to identify a clay with digger.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "therefore".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, people with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

191 words

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