In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowaday
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, reading is an important thing for
human
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humans
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and society. Mainly, the
news
flowing is needed to
known
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by update. So,
people
are reading
news
on
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everwhere
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everywhere
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such
as
online
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through online
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app
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apps
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and
websits
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websites
website
.
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are using online than reading
printed
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newspaper
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newspapers
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because
that is
no waste
on
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your
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apply
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valuable time. We can know about
the
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things
such
as
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contant
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content
constant
of
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wars, ‌a global pandemic,
economic
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and economic
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and climate change in time. We can
know
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a lot of
things
reading
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by reading
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news
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the news
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. So,
people
interest
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are interest
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about
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in
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the
news
not only
their
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in their
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country but
also
globe. And
people
want to
safe
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the world and so that
reason
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is reason
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doing reduce using the
papers
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paper
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. Using online
was
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very
benifit
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beneficial
for
human
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humans
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and our planet.
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, everybody
know
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what
things
need to become
news paper
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newspaper
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.
That is
tree
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a tree
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. Some printing houses
using
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the recycle but that can affect our
enviroment
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environment
.
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why
people
care about
that
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those
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things
. Reading
from
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online is
benifited
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benefited
a lot for our
enviroment
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environment
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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