A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. write a letter to your friend. In your letter Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you cannot come Ask him about other time to visit

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Dear Rakesh, I'm writing to thank you for your invitation. It's very kind of you but ,

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unfortunately

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I won't be able to make it

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my hectic work schedule. Let me explain my situation in more detail. I've recently started a new job teaching English and I've been working around the clock. I don't mean to complain, I've been enjoying it immensely. The school I'm working at is actually my old high school. It's really quite interesting teaching with people who used to be my teachers. Could you let me know of another time you will be free? I would love to come to stay. I'm interested in seeing your new house and meeting your wife. I'll be free in the new year because of the school holidays. I'll

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be free in winter. I'd certainly love to come to escape the cold to visit you

then

! Please let me know. Yours lovingly, Manpreet

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7 paragraphs

155 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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