In marriage today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is
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union of two people who support and help Add an article
a sacred
the sacred
eachother
in every aspect of Correct your spelling
each other
life
. There is ongoing debate regarding that it is both
husband
and wife
's responsibility to earn for the family. I totally agree with this
notion as both
spouses are working than
it will help them to get financial freedom. Correct word choice
and
This
essay will further
elaborate my views on favoring
argument.
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favouring
To begin
with, Both
working spouse
help Change to a plural noun
spouses
family
to get financial balance. Add an article
the family
a family
In other words
, if both
partners are working than
they will get double income and they can save money for the family. Correct your spelling
then
Due to
high
cost of living working Correct article usage
the high
spouse
can provide Fix the agreement mistake
spouses
standard
lifestyle to their loved ones Correct article usage
a standard
as well as
monetary support from partner
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their partner
create
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to create
good
bond between Add an article
a good
husband
and wife
. Not only this
, it help
them and Change the verb form
helps
family
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their families
for
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in
future
. Correct article usage
the future
For instance
, if they decide to have child
later in their Add an article
a child
life
than
that saving will eventually help them.
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then
further
, it creates sense
of stability in Add an article
a sense
life
. If both
husband
and wife
work then
those money
will even help Change the determiner
that money
family
in financial Fix the agreement mistake
families
crisis
and Fix the agreement mistake
crises
some
unexpected Correct quantifier usage
apply
situation
.To illustrate, if Fix the agreement mistake
situations
one
of the spouse
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spouses
loose
their job Verb problem
loses
then
other
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the other
one
can handle the family untill
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until
other
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the other
one
finds any other
job. Correct your spelling
another
Moreover
, in this
fastpace
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fast-paced
life
the cost of everything is high Add a comma
,life
such
as accomodation
,food and Correct your spelling
accommodation
transporation
. Correct your spelling
transportation
One
has to have enough money to fullfill
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fulfil
basic
needs of their family Correct article usage
the basic
hence
its
important to work and earn for Correct your spelling
it's
both
the
spouses.
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apply
To conclude
, it is responsibility
of Add an article
the responsibility
both
husband
and wife
to work and earn for their family as it will benefit them in life
for
getting financial freedom and Change preposition
by
stable
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a stable
life
. I totally agree with this
statement .Submitted by bhumikashah1414 on
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