The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
A diagrammatic representation of man-made
sheep
from existing ones but not through mating. It is immediately evident that there are five steps involved in cloning a
sheep
. The first is to obtain two female
sheep
. A body
cell
is extracted from one
sheep
labelled A whilst an egg
cell
is obtained from the other named B.
Next,
is the extraction step. A genetic material is derived from A's body
cell
,
similarly
, the nucleus is removed from the egg
cell
and taken from B. The fusion step
then
follows where the DNA from
sheep
A is combined with the egg
cell
from
sheep
B. After the fusion process, an embryo develops.
Finally
, the embryo is implanted into the womb of a foster mother which carries
this
until full development takes place. The final yield is a lamb, cloned from
sheep
A
that is
delivered by the foster mother.
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