A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/she has written to ask for your advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • describe why you think he/she will enjoy it • explain why you recommend studying at your university • give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ____________,

#friend #semester #country #advice #university #addresses #____________

Dear Denial, I hope you are doing well. I found your letter recently, I am glad that you are planning to do higher study. In the competition era, proficiency in any stream is a must. I would recommend you to choose one of the top Universities in the world. One of the best is my University

IIT

back in India. I have completed my bachelors over there. There are some benefits of studying at

IIT

firstly

, you will not only get a marvellous job after finishing your study but

also

IIT

provide scholarships for their best learners. As per your grades and interest in education,

this

University will suit you best.

Moreover

, you can only able to apply for admission to

IIT

after completing the internship exam. You can book

this

exam online. Mostly the ones who get above 80% in the exam will be able to be admitted to any course in the

IIT

. I would suggest you go through the

IIT

Hydrabad portal for more information. I hope you will have a good future ahead. I am looking forward to hearing about

this

. Yours Sincerely, Harpreet.

Submitted by harpreet291kaur on Mon Sep 25 2023

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