The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present

The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present
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The presented map represents information about Ryemouth village’s development in 1995 and nowadays.
Overall
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, the huge change was in the east and left south sides,
however
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, on the right south side was almost no change. It can be clearly seen that near the road which is located in the upper left corner and near 4 houses added
overall
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4 houses,
in addition
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to a little road.
Moreover
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, the farmland was changed for golf, and the area where there was a forest park was decreased, and nowadays in
this
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,place there are two tennis courts. It is obvious that there are a few places which did not move or change their own locations
such
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as a hotel and cafe which are located on the southern side of the map, but near the hotel was added one car parking. It is interesting to note that in the past sea was used for fishing, and near
this
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fishing port were places for selling fish and on the opposite side one a shop with similar sizes.
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, nowadays the fishing port is closed and there is nothing on the sea,
furthermore
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, the place of the fish market was changed for 4 apartments,
likewise
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, the shop was modified by the restaurant.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall".
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • evolution
  • seaside village
  • infrastructure
  • housing estates
  • commercialization
  • amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • demographics
  • sustainability
  • preservation
  • urbanization
  • tourism
  • accessibility
  • conservation
  • gentrification
  • land use
  • residential areas
  • urban planning
  • ecological footprint
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