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You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter: •describe the work you have been doing •explain why you can no longer do this work •recommend another person who is interested in the work

#work #community #manager #organization #•describe #•explain #•recommend #person
Dear Mr. peter Greetings ! I ,Ruchika Pawar , an
enthuthiast
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enthusiast
,serving as a head of the
ecoclub
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eco-club
eco club
 which has been an integral part of
ECORISE
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the ECORISE
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 community in the city of Yorkshire
since
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 centuries, am writing
this
 letter to bring
into
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 your notice regarding my services which no longer will be available from next month. Being the head of the
ecoclub
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eco-club
eco club
,
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me
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along with
 my hardworking ,diligent team members have planted
5000
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5,000
 trees in the entire region of the city
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since
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past
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 five years . Not only
this
, we
also
 dealt with the beautification of the city
as well as
 maintaining the cleanliness in and around the area.
However
 ,
due to
 my selection in
National
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the National
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conservation society
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Conservation Society
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 as a
cheif
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chief
 researcher in
the
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Australia ,
i
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 ought to put an end to my services with you .
Nevertheless
 , my co-worker Mr. Bobby who happened to assist me in my every task is a perfect candidate one could ask for . I am sure you would not be disappointed in him. I am looking forward to
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 a keen and optimistic reply from your end. Yours Faithfully Ruchika.
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