Some people feel paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers with relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.

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Nowadays people are very much interested in
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famous celebrities. They are willing to
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more about
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well-known
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, the more they admire them most are the more interested
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in knowing
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more about them. Even though they are a famous
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business
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and some well-known
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we can say even though they are famous but they
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have feelings, emotion and they are human like us. In that case, most fans and media continuously
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picture
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of them ,
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disturbing
their privacy is not correct. In my opinion, I won't accept
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I will
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agreeing
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because, they think if someone is choosing their
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career
path or their field of work so, they should
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instead
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were a businesswoman,
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have to deal with the losses that the company had made.
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should not complain about that. Like those celebrities should
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with
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problems. In conclusion, it's not like though
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are
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well-known people (acting, business and sports) so, they should not do any work. It's their job which made them famous and that made paparazzi
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take
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of them. in my opinion, they should know how to handle them and they should consider others opinion.
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