In some countries,more and more people are becoming interested in finding out the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this?

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houses.because some
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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