Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think this has bad effects on lifestyle and diets. Do you agree or disagree?

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Fast

food

has deeply ingrained itself into

people

's lives. There is an opinion that

such

a development is harmful to one's diet and health.

This

essay will explain why I agree that fast

food

is becoming increasingly

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dangerous. As the human population has exponentially increased, so has the demand for cheap and easily accessible

food

. Soon, fast

food

became a multibillion-dollar industry that provides surprisingly delicious, but

nevertheless

extremely unhealthy products. Fast

food

contains large amounts of sugar, fat, and several artificial chemicals that enhance its taste. Numerous studies have linked the increase in cancer, heart

diseases

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, and obesity in the population to the consumption of junk

food

Furthermore

, substances found in foods from McDonald's, KFC, Burger King, and others have been proven to cause an addiction to sugary junk foods, which explains why

people

who actively consume fast

food

crave it more than those with healthy diets.

On the other hand

, it could be argued that junk

food

is necessary because there is no other alternative for millions of

people

, as following a healthy diet has become increasingly difficult. In most countries, eating at a restaurant or buying natural products is twice as expensive compared to easier options

such

as fast

food

. Shopping for and preparing meals at home is

also

very time-consuming.

For example

, the vast majority of university students don't have the means to choose a healthy diet and are too busy studying to dedicate any time to cooking.

However

, the fact that

people

have no other choice but to harm themselves is part of the initial issue as well.

To conclude

, I believe that fast

food

is the only viable option for many

people

, but it is

nevertheless

a serious issue because it is hazardous to health and is becoming increasingly prevalent.

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Obesity
Heart disease
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Sedentary lifestyle
Addictive eating patterns
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