Some people believe that old buildings should be replaced with more modern ones. Other people argue that we should protect old buildings because they have a special value. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some individuals have the
opinion
that old
buildings
should be demolished and replaced by new modern
buildings
. the old
buildings
which carry historical value and are considered heritage
buildings
should not be replaced by new
buildings
as they can be a source of tourism income.
whereas
old
buildings
which are derelict should be replaced by modern
ones
. In
this
,essay we will discuss both views and present my
opinion
on why the old property should not be replaced by modern
ones
. First and foremost,Certain old
buildings
carry historical value and are symbols of heritage .
furthermore
, If restored properly they can be used as tourist attractions and money earned by charging entry fees to that site will fund their maintenance cost.
For example
, historical
sites
in New Delhi are open for holidaymakers so that they can see those
sites
.
moreover
, charging them fees covers the outlay of maintenance of these
sites
. I am of the
opinion
that old
buildings
which are historically important should not be replaced by modern
ones
.
However
, Old
buildings
which are derelict should be replaced by modern
ones
.
Buildings
which are old and in poor condition pose a threat to their residents.
furthermore
, Certain
buildings
in old cities always pose a threat to human life.
For instance
, in an Indian city like Mumbai
Buildings
in older areas of the city are always considered risky and need to be demolished and rebuilt into modern
ones
. ,
,
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I am of the
opinion
that only a handful of old
sites
can be replaced by modern
ones
. so building modern
ones
should not be considered a solution to reforming old
buildings
. In conclusion,
Although
old
buildings
sometimes pose risks to human life . a certain amount of restoration can provide a solution to
this
issue. I am of the
opinion
that old
buildings
should not be replaced by modern
ones
.
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