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The table shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions

The table shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions
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The supplied table displays and compares 4 types of cinema
are
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that are
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 watched by
people
 in developed
countries
. Seen together, the most facts to emerge from the table are that
action
 is
most
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the most
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 popular movie in all
countries
,
while
horror
 is
fourth
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the fourth
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successful
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most successful
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 film,
however
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,however
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 inhabitants of
India
more
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apply
show examples
consist of all
cinema
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cinemas
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 apart from
Horror
. Looking at the information in more
details
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detail
show examples
,
Action
 shows 29.9
million
of
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apply
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people
,
whereas
 20.3
million
people
 of
Romance
. There are 8
m
 (
action
) and 7.5
m
 (
Romance
) in
India
. Notwithstanding Ireland
make
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making
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 up
7.6million
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7.6 million
 individuals for
action
,
this
 film is two times higher than that of
romance
 (3.8
m
). Regard as Japan and New Zealand, these
countries
 account for almost tantamount
million
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millions
show examples
 with 7.1 and 7.2 of
action
besides
, 4.5
million
people
 of
romance
on
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in
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 both
countries
, respectively. Focusing on Comedy,
that
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which
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 is third
famous
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most famous
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 with 19,9
million
.
India
 stood at the higher
points
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point
show examples
 (6.5m).
In contrast
, Ireland has 5.5
million
people
for
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apply
show examples
watching comedy. Comedy
movie
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movies
show examples
 make up 3.9
million
 in New Zealand,
Likewise
4million
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4 million
 individuals in Japan. Alternatively,
15.8million
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15.8 million
 of
people
 belong
on
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to
show examples
Horror
,
by contrast
, Ireland is three times higher (6.4m) than that
of
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apply
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Japan and
India
, they show 2.5m and 2.2
m
, respectively,
similarly
 New Zealand account for 407
million
of
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apply
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inhabitants
for
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of
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horror
.
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