Some people believe that that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

From the

last

millennium , each ethnic group has

a different values

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and

historywhich

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histories in which

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they express

its

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their

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own cultural characteristics. Some

peole

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people

are of

opinion

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the opinion

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that customs which

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on

tourism

rewards will be

destoyed

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destroyed

.

However

, there are others

those

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who argue that

tourism

led to protecting traditions is the sole role

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it. From my perspective, I strongly lean toward the former idea. The importance of

tourism

is demonstrated throughout the world. From the economic advantages that

tourism

brings to host communities to the enjoyment that

tourism

brings to the tourists themselves, there is no disputing the value of

this

industry.

Besides

, many tourists will visit the destination especially to see its local heritage. It is

for

this

reason that many destinations will make every effort to preserve

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heritage.

This

could include putting restrictions in place or limiting tourist numbers, if necessary.Another reason for the importance of

tourism

is the

tourism

industry is and always has been a big voice when it comes to conservation and the protection of animals and nature.

Tourism

organisations and travel operators often run (and donate to) fundraisers. A pertinent example of

this

is that if everyone in the world

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your culture, it would

be preserve

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form century from centuries.

On the other hand

,

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numbers

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number

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of people

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concern

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that cultural

value

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values

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will be eroded if they are used for making money. The reason for

this

is that exhibits seem to be ruined more easily by

human’s

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impacts.

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, 100-year-old statues displayed in

museum

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museums

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may be

much

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touched and physically

effected

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affected

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by a number of visitor flocks, which could make them destroyed gradually.

Furthermore

, many

tourism

companies, today, pay more attention to building luxury and new buildings

such

as a range of modern resorts and sparkling hotel systems in order to attract more

number of

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visitors.

Therefore

, tourists

tent

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to turn their

back

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backs

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with

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the paces of traditional values, which could make the culture less popular. In conclusion, culture is

the

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invaluable

things

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which can not

be disappear

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and

tourism

have 2

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both sides : advantages and disadvantages must

consider

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thoroughly.