Some people believe that that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
From the
last
millennium , each ethnic group has Linking Words
a different values
and Correct the article-noun agreement
different values
a different value
historywhich
they express Verb problem
histories in which
its
own cultural characteristics. Some Correct pronoun usage
their
peole
are of Correct your spelling
people
opinion
that customs which Correct article usage
the opinion
relied
on Wrong verb form
rely
tourism
rewards will be Use synonyms
destoyed
. Correct your spelling
destroyed
However
, there are others Linking Words
those
who argue that Correct determiner usage
apply
tourism
led to protecting traditions is the sole role Use synonyms
to solve
it. From my perspective, I strongly lean toward the former idea.
The importance of Change preposition
in solving
tourism
is demonstrated throughout the world. From the economic advantages that Use synonyms
tourism
brings to host communities to the enjoyment that Use synonyms
tourism
brings to the tourists themselves, there is no disputing the value of Use synonyms
this
industry.Linking Words
Besides
, many tourists will visit the destination especially to see its local heritage. It is Linking Words
for
Linking Words
this
reason that many destinations will make every effort to preserve Linking Words
its
heritage. Correct pronoun usage
their
This
could include putting restrictions in place or limiting tourist numbers, if necessary.Another reason for the importance of Linking Words
tourism
is the Use synonyms
tourism
industry is and always has been a big voice when it comes to conservation and the protection of animals and nature. Use synonyms
Tourism
organisations and travel operators often run (and donate to) fundraisers. A pertinent example of Use synonyms
this
is that if everyone in the world Linking Words
known
your culture, it would Wrong verb form
knew
be preserve
form century from centuries.
Change the verb form
be preserved
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Correct article usage
a numbers
numbers
of people Fix the agreement mistake
number
Add a missing verb
are concern
concern
that cultural Replace the word
concerned
value
will be eroded if they are used for making money. The reason for Fix the agreement mistake
values
this
is that exhibits seem to be ruined more easily by Linking Words
human’s
impacts. Change noun form
human
For example
, 100-year-old statues displayed in Linking Words
museum
may be Fix the agreement mistake
museums
much
touched and physically Correct quantifier usage
apply
effected
by a number of visitor flocks, which could make them destroyed gradually. Correct your spelling
affected
Furthermore
, many Linking Words
tourism
companies, today, pay more attention to building luxury and new buildings Use synonyms
such
as a range of modern resorts and sparkling hotel systems in order to attract more Linking Words
number of
visitors. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Therefore
, tourists Linking Words
tent
to turn their Correct your spelling
tend
back
Fix the agreement mistake
backs
with
the paces of traditional values, which could make the culture less popular.
In conclusion, culture is Change preposition
on
the
invaluable Correct article usage
an
things
which can not Fix the agreement mistake
thing
be disappear
and Change the verb form
disappear
tourism
Use synonyms
have 2
both sides : advantages and disadvantages must Wrong verb form
has
consider
thoroughly.Wrong verb form
be considered
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