Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protwcting culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

It is often said that cultural

heritage

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would be uninhibited if

people

used them to make a

profit

from tourism,

while

some individuals believe that advertising for

this

culture is the best way to preserve

this

heritage

.

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essay points to the latter and will lay out the reason below. First things

first,

this

historical

sitesite

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could be managed by some travel agency. They attract a lot of tourist by

takingplace

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taking

some special tours, or some corporations will hold tours as a reward for their staff, they will contact

this

organization and book travel to some places for a break. Thanks to the tour operator's advertisements,

people

know

this

place

is an unknown

heritage

site

and make it more popular, some

profit

organisations will take

this

chance to hold more tours to attract

tourist

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and

making

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profit

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. But what will happen if they just need it for their

profit

and don't

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so much attention to its value ? In my point of view, when

this

heritage

site

that used to attract a lot of

people

has no potential to provide more

profit

,

this

place

will be ruined again, return to the

place

that it used to be, and

this

is a waste of humankind's history.

However

, if some organizations continued to do the same thing with travel

agency

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,

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mankind keep losing their culture? The answer is no. Some non-

profit

organizations will pay more attention to the historical

site

's value and will attract lots of journalists to write down the history of

this

place

and spread it for everybody to let all of them

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know it,

also

will not let

people

forget about it. In my opinion, popular a

site

that

people

have no memory or knowledge about

it

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is a useful way to

presevating

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preserve

the history of

human

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, so

that

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we should attend to its value

instead

of benefit.

To sum up

,

this

essay has

layed

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out some advantages of

latter

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and former choice, but

this

author

believe

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in the latter

bacause

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because

its

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big advantages.