Some people believe that cultured will be ruined if it used to to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Nowadays, a group of others believe that tradition will be affected if they are used to make money from tourist activities.

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, a number of the community think that it is the only solution

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saving

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traditional values.

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essay will discuss both views of the

arguement

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argument

in detail and provide evidence as to why

tourism

is superior in the

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of different customs. It is vital to understand that, we have some groups of the

pubilc

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public

who

belive

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in cultural manipulation by tourists,

such

as the visitors may destroy the public laws because there are lack of information about the

country

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rules, so it brings distempered all over the province.

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their belief is,

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various kinds of the public from all over the world come to the

country

it

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affect the

country

's

culture

due to

different kinds of the public with different cultures coming and altering the

country

's

culture

. On the other side, other groups of people think about the

tourism

industry as the only action that looks after the

culture

. When a historic site or a site that shows a

country

's cultural heritage is made accessible to the public, visitors from all over the world will soon flock there. They will

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share

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experience in the local

culture

with their friends and families once they return home. In my opinion, the best way of

culture

protection is to spread it all over the world

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that

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visitors do

this

easily.

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,

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the earns from tourists, the

goverment

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government

could allocate all the revenue to enhance the

civilication

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civilisation

civilization

. In

this

procedure

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more public come to visit the

country

.

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conclusion, despite the loss of natural scenery by mass

tourism

in some people's view, it is more advantageous to protect

culture

through

tourism

due to

the economy and education.

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, it should have been demonstrated that

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both views

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issue

to be

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the best way option.