The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by providing at least six years of free education for each child, so that all children can read, write and use numbers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the
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in emergent nations, which
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increases every year. Now people are beginning to realize that the main problem for the countries is the number of poor citizens. Personally, I tend to think that
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is the most predominant thing for everyone, and because of
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I will write about my point of view for
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, it is well known that
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of
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plays a crucial role
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the bright future of every
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. What I mean here is that without
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any basic
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there will always be
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poverty
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in every
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. One of the main reasons behind
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the
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of poor families who can not afford an
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for their children. A good case in point is one of the most popular, and
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a
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with an enormous
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of
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India. Because
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almost 80% of
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the population
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in India does not
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any type of knowledge.
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, there
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a lot of oil under the ground
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India, which can assist them
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the most developed and richest
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in the world.
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, it can
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be argued that
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can afford
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years of free
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for
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poor families.
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to say children with a great desire for knowledge can reach their goals, and reduce the
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of
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in
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country
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the country
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. Take
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Kazakhstan where 11 years of
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is totally free, because of what the
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in
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country
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is very low. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that
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of the statement about giving a free
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is
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beneficial way to decrease the number of
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for
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every
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • literacy
  • numeracy
  • economic growth
  • skilled workforce
  • investment
  • employment opportunities
  • break the cycle of poverty
  • informed decisions
  • healthcare
  • infrastructure
  • access to technology
  • stable governance
  • challenges
  • cultural barriers
  • free education
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