Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Tranquillity
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of our life
have
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has
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a direct correlation to
act
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acting
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within the
law
. If people break the rules and do not observe the
law
, they should be severely punished.
Otherwise
,
chaotic
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will have been increased in
society
. I believe that harsh sentences should
be exist
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exist
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in order not to
rise
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raise
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robbery rates.
This
essay will discuss how
this
might be a positive phenomenon.
To begin
with,
security
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the security
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of a
society
depends on two underlying factors.
Firstly
, a country must
be
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progress in technology in order to obtain military security through other countries.
According to
several news reports,
United
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the United
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States had brilliant experts in
military
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the military
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field
which
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who
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have
undertook
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undertaken
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defense
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defence
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.
Secondly
,
distribution
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the distribution
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of drug abuse in cities
bring
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brings
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about the decay of their political systems.
Major
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reason
of
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for
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that can
knew
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be
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juvenile unemployment.
Therefore
, the government should give a motivation to youth with enough salary and
then
see their
society
will be
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improved
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improve
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.
Offence
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Offences
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in
society
should have severe or light
punishment
. Severe
punishment
can
created
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create
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influence
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the influence
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of
murder
. Court justice voted deliberate
murder
or involuntary manslaughter after a person who had committed
murder
. If the killer
commit
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commits
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a deliberate
murder
and the family of the victim
do
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does
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not give assent, court justice will be voted ‘laburnum’.
Otherwise
, the murderer will pay a heavy fine. Light
punishment
also
can
happened
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happen
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as the effect of
breakdown
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breaking
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the
law
such
as driving regulations.
For instance
, if people’s
car
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cars
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crossed
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cross
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the red light
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at in
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in
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an
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intersection, they will
be suffered
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suffer
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the consequences.
However
,
violation
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the violation
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might
had
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have
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been increased and they paid a heavy fine but it cannot
knew
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be known
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as a severe
punishment
.
Consequently
, it is better to respect the
law
. In conclusion, a better lifestyle
related
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is related
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to
military
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the military
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army and local security. I strongly believe that
modern
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a modern
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country
had
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is
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more secure than
poor
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a poor
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country.
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