Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Tranquillity
of our life Add an article
The tranquillity
have
a direct correlation to Change the verb form
has
act
within the Change the verb form
acting
law
. If people break the rules and do not observe the law
, they should be severely punished. Otherwise
, chaotic
will have been increased in Replace the word
chaos
society
. I believe that harsh sentences should be exist
in order not to Change the verb form
exist
rise
robbery rates. Correct your spelling
raise
This
essay will discuss how this
might be a positive phenomenon.
To begin
with, security
of a Correct article usage
the security
society
depends on two underlying factors. Firstly
, a country must be
progress in technology in order to obtain military security through other countries. Unnecessary verb
apply
According to
several news reports, United
States had brilliant experts in Correct article usage
the United
military
field Add an article
the military
which
have Correct pronoun usage
who
undertook
Change the verb form
undertaken
defense
. Change the spelling
defence
Secondly
, distribution
of drug abuse in cities Correct article usage
the distribution
bring
about the decay of their political systems. Change the verb form
brings
Major
reason Add an article
The major
A major
of
that can Change preposition
for
knew
juvenile unemployment. Verb problem
be
Therefore
, the government should give a motivation to youth with enough salary and then
see their society
will be
Verb problem
apply
improved
.
Wrong verb form
improve
Offence
in Fix the agreement mistake
Offences
society
should have severe or light punishment
. Severe punishment
can created
Change the verb form
create
influence
of Correct article usage
the influence
murder
. Court justice voted deliberate murder
or involuntary manslaughter after a person who had committed murder
. If the killer commit
a deliberate Change the verb form
commits
murder
and the family of the victim do
not give assent, court justice will be voted ‘laburnum’. Correct subject-verb agreement
does
Otherwise
, the murderer will pay a heavy fine. Light punishment
also
can happened
as the effect of Change the verb form
happen
breakdown
the Correct your spelling
breaking
law
such
as driving regulations. For instance
, if people’s car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
crossed
the red light Wrong verb form
cross
Change preposition
at in
in
intersection, they will Correct your spelling
an
be suffered
the consequences. Wrong verb form
suffer
However
, violation
might Correct article usage
the violation
had
been increased and they paid a heavy fine but it cannot Change the verb form
have
knew
as a severe Wrong verb form
be known
punishment
. Consequently
, it is better to respect the law
.
In conclusion, a better lifestyle related
to Add a missing verb
is related
military
army and local security. I strongly believe that Correct article usage
the military
modern
country Correct article usage
a modern
had
more secure than Verb problem
is
poor
country.Add an article
a poor
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