The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These bar charts provide information about three types of
medals
won ( silver , gold , bronze) , in the top five countries in the
Summer
and
Winter
Olympics
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the USA was ranked the highest medal winner in the
Summer
Olympics
.
While
in the
winter
,season Norway recorded the highest
number
of
medals
.
According to
what is shown in the first chart of the
Winter
Olympics
, Norway and the USA were ranked the top highest medal winners,
whereas
Norway's people exceeded 350
medals
and just over 300
medals
in the United States.
However
, the
number
of
medals
in Russia and Canada approximately reached two hundred.
while
Germany is ranked as the third-highest medal winner. Turning to the
Summer
Olympics
,Great Britain and France have the lowest patterns in the
number
of three categories of
medals
.
While
the United States players have won 2,500
medals
.
In addition
, Russia and Germany had similar numbers of gold,silver, and bronze by 1900 and 1700 respectively.
To sum up
,we could say that the
number
of
medals
awarded in the
Summer
Olympics
is higher than In the
Winter
Olympics
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words medals, summer, winter, olympics, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.

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  • medal tally
  • top-performing countries
  • notable differences
  • highlight trends
  • summer vs. winter Olympics
  • significant differences
  • overall performance
  • comparative analysis
  • dominance in events
  • athletic prowess
  • statistical comparison
  • consistency in winning
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