Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People
have different views about methods of teaching in schools.
While
some
people
agree with the idea of using modern media tools for lessons, I believe that
students
should learn from both
books
and media tools. Many
people
want to replace conventional
books
by using films, computers, and games in education. The first reason is that
students
always love interesting new things, so new teaching methods will increase their attention and curiosity about subjects. Another reason is that learning from
books
is difficult, abstract, and lengthy at
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times
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, it is hard to understand and lose interest in learning of
students
.
For example
,
students
can’t remember the specific date of each historical period recorded in documents, but it is easy to imagine the events
happened
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in the past through
the
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documentary films.
Finally
,
this
learning method helps to promote
pupil’s
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observation
skills
and even teamwork
skills
.
However
, many
people
keep
thing
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in perspective, using
books
in the educational environment. Because
books
are an endless source of knowledge, provide a large volume of information that may not
readily
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available in media tools.
Besides
,
books
are easy to carry and use in classroom contexts.
Furthermore
, reading
books
help
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students
to improve their
skills
like logical thinking
skills
, imagination
skills
, … and
sometime
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enlarge their vocabulary.
For instance
for
learner
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a learner
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who loves literature and wants to write a beautiful text, reading
books
to develop vocabulary is very necessary. In conclusion, there are different views about
this
problem. I think both teaching methods are essential for lessons in schools
due to
many causes.
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