The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays whole the world is converted into
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village
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due to
airlines. Many companies are reducing
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the prices
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of
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so that
people
easily travel around the world.
This
is one of
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controversial
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rate some
people
are
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feel
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is
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positive
development and others are negative. In
this
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essay
easy
, I am going to examine
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question from both points of
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and
then
give my opinion on the matter.
To begin
with, they have more
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for
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general
public to buy a ticket
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in
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affordable price and save the most valuable time.
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, As per
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tourisum
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tourism
industries business is going to boom
up
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.
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, If you are planning to travel 2000 Km,
then
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minimum
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hours is required for travelling, but with
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a plane
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plane
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this
distance is covered in only 2 to 3 hours.
People
are visiting at new
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locations
location
early and easily.
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, If they have lots of benefits but some
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is here.
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all
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the people
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are
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going
on
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to
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airport
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the airport
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then
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increase
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crowd and they
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some additional manpower are security.
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people
are not using
the
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other transport.
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,
according to
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of
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of India, 30 percent
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of businesses
less
of
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train and road
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transport
due to
airlines.
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is high
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initial
area of all the countries they have their own protocols. In conclusion , after
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analysing
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argument
. I think that both of these views have
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merit
merits
.
Low
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cost price of airlines is favourable for
people
but it
is
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effects
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affects
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on
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apply
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other
transports
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transport
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Affordability
  • Global mobility
  • Convenience
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic benefits
  • Cultural exchange
  • Enhanced connectivity
  • Drawbacks
  • Sustainable travel
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