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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action you would like the landlord to take

#landlord #furniture #action
Dear Tom, I am Tokateti Totoki and I recently
move
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in to
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 your rental house at 10 Lochiel Avenue
last
 week. For your information, I
new
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 in
this
 area and I am from Kiribati. I live with my wife and
a
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children in your flat. The purpose of writing
to
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is to
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 inform you
the
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 issue that we encountered when we
move
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 to your apartment. The furniture of your house
are
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is
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 worn out.
For instance
, the chair we use
at
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in
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 the kitchen
it
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is
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 broken
while
 we sit
on
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iton
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. I
am so worry
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 about my kids
due to
 their carelessness and I do need your help
for
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the
avoiding
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 the incident for my children in the future.I
am
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 so happy if it
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 as soon as possible. I suggest
if
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you
could
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buy new
furnitures
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furniture
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 that
are
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 broken or
been
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has been
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 used by other tenants.
In addition
 to that I have
other
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 option if I can purchase
in
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at
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 my own expense and you can do the
reembursement
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reimbursement
 so that I can get
immediately
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it immediately
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 and by that time there
is
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will be
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 no more worry about my family
issue
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issues
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 in the coming future. I appreciate
you
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your
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 time and let me know if you agree with my ideas. Do not
hestates
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hesitate
hesitates
 to call me on my number
of
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 just stop by at the house anytime after working hours. yours' sincerely Tokateti Totoki
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