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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #interaction #people #society
It's commonly said that
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 of social
media
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extremely
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increasing which has aroused public debates about
the
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related problems, like replacing it
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a
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face-to-face interaction, in the
last
 couple of years.
This
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the pros score cons of
this
 issue. Modern technology has equipped us with brand-new feathers
such
 as WhatsApp, Instagram and Facebook which all are called social
media
. As a significant use of
this
 equipment, face-calls could be mentioned as a good fit. In spite of these facts mentioned above, the modern world has made a highly competitive circumstance that urges
people
 to leave their own cities in order to get job positions even if it’s over the seas.
Furthermore
, it makes families,
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 are the most important building blocks of society, spread out. Considering all these facts,
people
 can’t be blamed for using social
media
 as a virtual interaction
instead
 of face-to-face speaking, because there are no more choices when their loved ones are living miles away
and
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Here
the
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 place where the most serious role of social
media
 shows up.
Besides
 all aspects discussed, social
media
 is a
time
 and cost-effective solution for running business meetings, it's hard to estimate how much it could cost
having
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 a face-to-face meeting each
time
 in the long run. Admittedly, the influence created by the
media
 is largely positive,
although
 there is a slight negative effect
also
. During online communications, overuse of
cellphones
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cell phones
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, which is a fascinating tool can cause some problems like spending less
time
 with family or pursuing
open air
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 hobbies. In some other cases it has been shown that because it’s the easiest way of interaction,
people
 wouldn’t get to see
people
 they love even if they live next door which as a side effect
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 lethargic and living a sedentary lifestyle can be mentioned.
As a consequence
, by considering all
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 argued above associated with
this
 universal trend, I would reiterate my opinion by saying that in
this
 technological
era
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 there is no other choice
to
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but to
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 be in touch all the
time
 with
people
who
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 we care about except getting involved with social
media
.
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