some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue , but other consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture . Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Wheter

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Whether

culture

-based

tourism

recieve

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receives

income

or

damage

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its character .

However

, from prior experience , it is more beneficial to make

tourism

of

culture

and preserve it . Despite those who believe that

culture

will be destroyed as being used for

tourism

revenue. It must be understood that the system of

tourism

is more developed .

This

is

due to

an important feature of

culture

which is popularize the attraction of the nation . With

this

in mind , visiting impressive

culture

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venue

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takes more fancy of most

tourist

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tourists

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.

As a result

, some of the

part

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in their

income

will be used to develop and protect the character

culture

.

Thus

, there are some advantages of publicizing

culture

as part

as

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tourism

sites.

However

, some people think that

tourism

is more destructive when

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culture

for only earning its revenue as some disadvantages . There is a belief that

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culture

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approach is now out of control because of the irresponsibility of protecting it .

Therefore

, it is easy to notice why there is a range of bad images and corruptions of

culture

and it should not be used to receive

tourism

income

.

This

writer believes that government must take

respondsibility

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responsibility

for

culture

tourism

.

This

is

due to

the fact that

culture

tourism

has two sides

of

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their nation's character which means that its

income

contribute

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to

preserve

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culture

and

culture

is

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also

become ruined. Because of

this

, if there is a better solution

of

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the government , it would both develop

tourism

and protect

culture

.

Thus

,

having

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a

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apply

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culture- based

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culture-based

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tourism

should be

controled

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controlled

correctedly

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correctly

corrected

by not only the government but

also

our awareness .

Hence

, it should have been shown that

populazing

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popularizing

populating

culture

must be taken in

tourism

to develop its

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potential

potiential

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potential

benefits