Write a letter to you

Dear Linda, Long time no see. My name is Emma. We met at Tom’s party. We haven’t met up to now. Thank you for your reply. I am writing

this

letter to invite you to my birthday party next time. We met each other

last

summer holiday. You and I visited many beautiful places in Vietnam

such

as Hoan Kiem Lake , Dong Xuan Market , and One Pillar Pagoda …. ,

Besides

we ate delicious food in Hanoi. I took you to Ha Long Bay , we went jogging on the beach and went swimming. I remember that the weather was very nice. We enjoyed the weekend day together. You told and shared with me everything in life. It was amazing. I really felt relaxed. It is an unforgettable memory. Next month it will be my birthday. I hope you can come to my birthday party. We can eat cakes, play a lot of games and talk together. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your friend, Emma.

Submitted by luongtrangnhung283 on Wed Sep 27 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

170 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

bilingual
multilingual
fluency
communicate
cognitive skills
cultural awareness
opportunities
globalized world
job market
interact
linguistic abilities
cultural exchange
language proficiency
language barrier
foreign travel
personal growth
academic achievement
self-confidence
enhance
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Write a letter to you

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many people think that TV has a positive impact on children’s creativity skills, while others believe that watching TV is damaging creative skills. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher, while others believe that students’ attitudes are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?