The bar chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates how many
visitors
of three types visited Use synonyms
to
a Remove the preposition
apply
museum
from 1997 to 2012.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
adult Linking Words
visitors
were the overwhelming majority throughout the years. Use synonyms
In contrast
, special exhibition Linking Words
visitor
were not particularly interested in going to the Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
museum
.
In 1997, 300,100 adults visited the Use synonyms
museum
, there was a slight increase Use synonyms
on
2007 Change preposition
in
at
302,200. Over the next ten years, their attendance experienced a significant rise to reach a peak of 400,500, but by 2012 had Change preposition
to
decline
to 380,000. Special exhibition Change the verb form
declined
visitors
Use synonyms
tends
to increase gradually over the years, the figure hit the lowest point at 28,000 in the first year to end the period at 42,000.
The opposite in the case of Correct subject-verb agreement
tend
their
120,000 people under 15 Change the word
the
year
old Fix the agreement mistake
years
visitors
went to the Use synonyms
museum
at the Use synonyms
begining
of the timeframe, and Correct your spelling
beginning
then
Linking Words
drop
to 82,300 in the final year. Wrong verb form
dropped
In addition
, the total attendance at the Linking Words
museum
started at 448,100 Use synonyms
visitors
before Use synonyms
hit
the highest point at 525,200 in 2007. By the end of the period, the figure had fallen, reaching 504,300 Wrong verb form
hitting
visitors
.Use synonyms
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