The bar chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates how many
visitors
of three types visited to
a Remove the preposition
apply
museum
from 1997 to 2012.
Overall
, it is clear that
adult visitors
were the overwhelming majority throughout the years. In contrast
, special exhibition visitor
were not particularly interested in going to the Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
museum
.
In 1997, 300,100 adults visited the museum
, there was a slight increase on
2007 Change preposition
in
at
302,200. Over the next ten years, their attendance experienced a significant rise to reach a peak of 400,500, but by 2012 had Change preposition
to
decline
to 380,000. Special exhibition Change the verb form
declined
visitors
tends
to increase gradually over the years, the figure hit the lowest point at 28,000 in the first year to end the period at 42,000.
The opposite in the case of Correct subject-verb agreement
tend
their
120,000 people under 15 Change the word
the
year
old Fix the agreement mistake
years
visitors
went to the museum
at the begining
of the timeframe, and Correct your spelling
beginning
then
drop
to 82,300 in the final year. Wrong verb form
dropped
In addition
, the total attendance at the museum
started at 448,100 visitors
before hit
the highest point at 525,200 in 2007. By the end of the period, the figure had fallen, reaching 504,300 Wrong verb form
hitting
visitors
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