The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
diagram
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illustrates the anatomical structure and the functioning of a neuron.
Overall
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,
according to
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the given
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diagram
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the neuron mainly consists of six parts, namely
dendrites
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,
cell
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body
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or soma,
axon
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,
myelin
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sheath
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terminal
buttons
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and the
received-massages
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received messages
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from other
cells
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via
dendrites
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is
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send
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sent
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to the
cell
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body
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.
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they are passed away from the
cell
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body
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through
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axon
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the axon
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to the terminal
buttons
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. When looking at the
diagram
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, it shows that
,
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the
cell
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body
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, or soma, is surrounded by the
dendrites
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. Which
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as branches of a tree, at the beginning thick and gradually
decrease
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decreasing
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thickness and
end
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ending
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up as a thread.
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an
axon
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,
covered
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by the
myelin
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sheath
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but not all axons
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have
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myelin
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a myelin
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sheath
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. The
cell
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body
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, or soma, is surrounded by
dendrites
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. There are a number of
branches- like
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branches-like
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structures which like the branches of a tree, become thinner toward their ends. These
dendrites
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act as
the
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receptors
of
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messages from other
cells
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. One of the branches,
however
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, has no
dendrites
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and
this
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is called
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axon
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an axon
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.
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of receiving messages from other
cells
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, it transmits information away from the
cell
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body
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to other neurons, muscles, or glands. The
myelin
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sheath
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covers the
axon
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of some neurons, helping to speed up neural impulses the electrical signal passing down the
axon
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in the
diagram
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as action potential.
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signals travel down the
axon
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until they reach the terminal
buttons
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that branch out from the
axon
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. These
buttons
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,
finally
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, enable the neuron to form junctions with other
cells
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words diagram, dendrites, cell, body, axon, myelin, sheath, buttons, cells with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • neuron
  • nervous system
  • dendrites
  • soma
  • cell body
  • nucleus
  • axon
  • electrical impulses
  • myelin sheath
  • axon terminals
  • neurotransmitters
  • synapse
  • signal transmission
  • insulating
  • unmyelinated fibers
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