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More and more plactic waste has polluted cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken.

#plactic #waste #cities #countryside #oceans #measures
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Nowadays, people
use
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plastic
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 in their day-to-day life
due to
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 which cities are being polluted
as well as
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 the
countryside
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 .
This
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 has become a measure of problems for the nation. As a society are using more and more
plastic
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 which
have
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has
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 polluted cities, the
countryside
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, oceans and land.
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,
to
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too
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 much
pollution
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 it is affecting
on
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the society's
health
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. There are so many types of
pollution
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 like air
pollution
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,
noice
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noise
pollution
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, land
pollution
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,
air
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and air
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pollution
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 and the main reason is
plastic
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. It is easy to
use
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plastic
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 because price friendly but it affects
on
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public
health
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 too much.
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,
a
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children are buying
plastic
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 to save money but it even affects on
health
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also
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. There are so many alternatives for
plastic
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like
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a
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population can
use
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 paper bags
,
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 and clothes bags and there are so many eco-friendly bags which can
be
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use
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 by the community and can help the community
to
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save people's
health
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. If a person is using
plastic
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then
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 he or she should reuse it
as well as
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 itreclcye.
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, a person can
use
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 a cloth bag when he or she is going shopping.
Plastic
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 is even polluting the
countryside
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 because when the population go on a trip to the
countryside
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. NGOs should give more and more knowledge to the public.
To conclude
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, it can be said that cities, states, the
countryside
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, land and oceans are being polluted by
pollution
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.
This
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 has caused so many problems like
on
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people's
health
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 and much more. By taking some measures by society, community, NGOs and the improvement of the nation can be made.
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