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Band 3.5

More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, the countryside and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

#plastic #waste #cities #countryside #oceans #measures
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Now days
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, it can be seen that people are more inclined towards using
plastic
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however
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this
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 is one
the
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of the
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cause
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causes
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 of polluted environment and oceans. We will discuss about
cause
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 and some
measure
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measures
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 which can
implement
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 by both
government
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as well as
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 by
peapole
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people
.
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, human
are
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practicing
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practising
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 wrongly, the consumption of
plastic
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are
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is
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 more and more
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for
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,for
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 instance, vegetables are packed in polybag
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 of
paperbag
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paper bag
,
school
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and school
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bottel
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bottles
 are
plastic
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.
Moreover
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, manufacturing of
plastic
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 are higher in all city which is one of the
cause
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 of using more of it.
Secondly
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, oceans are
littering
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by
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with
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 chips rapper or polythene which
cause
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 detrimental
effect
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effects
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 on marine life
which
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apply
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following more death of aquatic
spices
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species
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. Measure should
be take
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be taken
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 to solve
this
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 type of
problems
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problem
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.
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 with,
government
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the government
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 should take strict action against company who manufacture
non recycled
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non-recycled
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 items ,
instead
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 of
plastic
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 glass item and brass can
be use
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be used
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. Glass can
be recycle
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be recycled
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 but if
plastic
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 are recycled again and again it can
cause
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 cancer.
Last
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not
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but not
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the
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least,
peapole
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people
 should
be educate
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be educated
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 about how they can keep their environment clean .
To conclude
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 ,
government
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the government
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 should
orginze
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organise
 some
event
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events
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 to teach about cleanliness
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 make
strick
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strict
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rule
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rules
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 and set some sort
fine
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of fine
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 against those who don't follow rules.
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