A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. Tell your friend about your planned party Ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there Ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the men.

Dear Joana, Hope you and your family are in good health.
I`m
really excited to inform you that I will be
come
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in next week to Sri Lanka, for my
vaccation
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vaccination
.
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, we
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meet
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each other for
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time and I really miss
yoor
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you
cracking jokes. Anyway, When
i
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was
scrowling
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scrolling
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the Instagram I saw
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nice pictures that you
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posted
in
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last
week. So,
i`m
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writing
this
letter to get some information regarding the hotel that you visited. In next month, 5th of March
i
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was
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decided to celebrate my birthday party with my family and
also
with my close friends.
However
,
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planing
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planning
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to invite fifteen people and hope that
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the resturent
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resturent
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restaurant
is ideal with my theme colours.
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,
i`m
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very interested
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in having
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night and
ourtdoor
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outdoor
funcion
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functions
in
there
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garden.
However
, I hope
this
hotel is not far
way
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from Colombo right? So can you please tell me the name of
this
nice
resturent
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restaurant
and
also
,be kind enough to share the location with clear
direction
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. Because
i
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want
visit
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before
i
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book the
resturent
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restaurant
. As you know,
I`m
still
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to have
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in having
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nice
foods
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along with
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preperations
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preparations
presentations
on plates. I saw you
also
had
a nice desserts
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a nice dessert
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mixed with chocolates. Can
i
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know the name of that dessert
Moreover
, If you mind please tell me the
dishers
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dishes
that
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can
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to the meal plan for dinner for my guests
.
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Also
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do not forget to share the
recommandations
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recommendations
of
you
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friends as well. See you soon Peter
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