A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. Tell your friend about your planned party Ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there Ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the men.
Dear Joana,
Hope you and your family are in good health.
I`m
really excited to inform you that I will be come
in next week to Sri Lanka, for my Wrong verb form
coming
vaccation
. Correct your spelling
vaccination
However
, we didn`t
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haven`t
meet
each other for Verb problem
seen
long
time and I really miss Change the article
a long
yoor
cracking jokes. Anyway, When Correct your spelling
you
i
was Change the capitalization
I
scrowling
the Instagram I saw Correct your spelling
scrolling
scrawling
your
nice pictures that you Change the pronoun
the
was
posted Unnecessary verb
apply
in
Change preposition
apply
last
week. So,i`m
writing Change the capitalization
I`m
this
letter to get some information regarding the hotel that you visited.
In next month, 5th of March i
Change the capitalization
I
was
decided to celebrate my birthday party with my family and Unnecessary verb
apply
also
with my close friends. However
, i`m
Change the capitalization
I`m
planing
to invite fifteen people and hope that Correct your spelling
planning
Correct article usage
the resturent
resturent
is ideal with my theme colours. Correct your spelling
restaurant
Also
, i`m
very interested Change the capitalization
I`m
to have
night and Change preposition
in having
ourtdoor
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outdoor
funcion
in Correct your spelling
functions
there
garden.
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their
However
, I hope this
hotel is not far way
from Colombo right? So can you please tell me the name of Correct your spelling
away
this
nice resturent
and Correct your spelling
restaurant
also
,be kind enough to share the location with clear direction
. Because Fix the agreement mistake
directions
i
want Change the capitalization
I
visit
before Add the particle
to visit
i
book the Change the capitalization
I
resturent
.
As you know, Correct your spelling
restaurant
I`m
still interesting
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interested
to have
nice Change preposition
in having
foods
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food
along with
eye catching
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eye-catching
preperations
on plates. I saw you Correct your spelling
preparations
presentations
also
had a nice desserts
mixed with chocolates. Can Correct the article-noun agreement
a nice dessert
nice desserts
i
know the name of that dessert Change the capitalization
I
Moreover
, If you mind please tell me the dishers
that Correct your spelling
dishes
i
can Change the capitalization
I
added
to the meal plan for dinner for my guestsChange the verb form
add
.
Change the punctuation
?
Also
do not forget to share the Add a comma
,Also
recommandations
of Correct your spelling
recommendations
you
friends as well.
See you soon
PeterCorrect pronoun usage
your
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite