Many people believe that social networking side like (Facebook) have had a use negative impact on both individuals and society .to what extend do you agree?
A high number of citizens argue that social media has impacted the lives of members of society in a harmful way. I completely agree with
this
statement and my strong conviction is that social network has affected our lives badly.
One negative effect of public networks is that almost everyone, regardless of their age, easily has access to different gadgets that connect to the internet. As a result
, almost all these people can see whatever is shared on different platforms such
as Instagram, Twitter,and Facebook. However
, those contents might be inappropriate for many members of the young generation as they may show acts of violence or promote the use of drugs. Moreover
, many celebrities are now considered as
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many
adults, who can Correct word choice
apply
also
advertise some products in order to make money or encourage acts that are not totally accepted in a certain community or even considered unethical. For example
, these day
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prople
on TikTok foster the use of Ozempic Correct your spelling
people
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a medicine to lose weight and get skinny, Correct your spelling
as
while
its primary usage is for type-two diabetes and in the long term, it has very bad sideeffects
.
Another problem is that some individuals spend a great amount of time, scrolling up and down on different social media platforms when they can actually dedicate that time Correct your spelling
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In other words
, wasting time on these apps will not only cause physical problems such
as neckache but also
enhance the sense of not being enough in many young adults as they see so many unreal pictures and posts from others which as a result
, may lead to comparing themselves with others.
In conclusion, I totally agree with this
idea that social networking has done more bad than good as many juveniles face many detremental
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contents
and some posts actually actuate the sense of self-doubt in many individuals.Fix the agreement mistake
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