An increasing number of people now are using the internet to meet other and socialize, some think this has brought people closer together while other think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Numerous
indivduals
are now using Correct your spelling
individuals
internet
to Add an article
the internet
scoialise
, meet and date . some Correct your spelling
socialise
socialize
people
thinks
it brings citizens closer. Change the verb form
think
whereas
few humans beleif
that it cuts off Correct your spelling
believe
people
from their immediate surroundings . using internet
too much isolates them from family members and real Add an article
the internet
friends
. This
essay wiill
discuss both views and present my opinion on Correct your spelling
will
this
.
First and foremost, Internet
should be used for positive purposes. Add an article
the Internet
however
Add a comma
,however
peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
used
it for connecting with lost Wrong verb form
use
friends
, networking or dating. using internet
for socialising can prove perilous as online crimes are increasing. Add an article
the internet
As a result
, they can be trolled, cheated
using Correct word choice
and cheated
internet
. Add an article
the internet
For example
, sites like facebook
Capitalize word
Facebook
, instagram
should be used with utmost precautions. I am of the opinion that Correct your spelling
and Instagram
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
should not be used for socialising.
Capitalize word
Internet
Furthermore
, Internet
usuage
is well Correct your spelling
usage
comed
to connect with Correct your spelling
used
peoples
and form Fix the agreement mistake
people
friendship
or Fix the agreement mistake
friendships
relationship
. It Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
bring
positive Change the verb form
brings
chnages
in society Correct your spelling
changes
nad
Correct your spelling
and
harmoney
Correct your spelling
harmony
prevail
among Correct subject-verb agreement
prevails
people
. Moreover
,most people
use internet
to communicate or express their Add an article
the internet
feeling
with Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
friends
. it brings them closer. For example
,in india
more Change the capitalization
India
people
use Whatsapp
to chat and communicate with their Correct your spelling
WhatsApp
friends
and relatives. Correct article usage
The internet
internet
makes Capitalize word
Internet
people
friendlier and social. Although
it can be used for socialising , internet
should not be used for Add an article
the internet
meet
and Wrong verb form
meeting
socialize
Wrong verb form
socialising
others
.
In conclusion, Change preposition
with others
Althouh
Correct your spelling
although
internet
is Correct article usage
the internet
powerful
technology . it has Add an article
a powerful
own
Correct pronoun usage
its own
hazard
, crimes like grooming, cat Fix the agreement mistake
hazards
fising
or trolling Correct your spelling
fishing
commonon
Correct your spelling
common on
common
internet
. I am of the opinion that Correct article usage
the internet
internet
should not be used for Capitalize word
Internet
socilaisng
.Correct your spelling
socialising
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