the table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed
The table and two pie charts illustrate information about the 2017-2018
police
budget
in one region in the UK. The table shows the sources of money
from three categories in million
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millions
pounds
and the pie charts provide the proportion of Change preposition
of pounds
money
spent on each category.
Overall
, it is clear that
the 2018 budget
was slightly more than in 2017. The money
spent on officers' and staff’s salaries the most while
spending the least on technology.
First of all, the 2017 police
budget
showed slightly less contribution from all sources compared to 2018. The national government funded 175.5 million
pounds
in 2017 and 177.8 million
pounds
to the police
in 2018 while
the budget
from local taxes collected for both years are 91.2 and 102.3 million
pounds
, respectively. However
only 38 Add a comma
,However
million
pounds
was handed in from other sources in 2017 and 38.5 million
pounds
in 2018.
In terms of money
spent by the police
,75% of their 2017 budget
was spent on officers’ and staff’s income while
slightly less than that figure at 69% was spent on the same category in 2018. In both years 17% of the total money
was spent on buildings and transportation, however
technology was the least spent in both years, but in 2018, they spent almost the figure on building and transportation at 14% of their Add the comma(s)
,however
budget
compared to only 8% spent in 2017.Submitted by patinyajaithan on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, money, million, pounds with synonyms.
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