People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In contemporary ,society every person, who desires to get good labour or live overseas does not have a problem, for the reason

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that advancements in technology and developing transportation make it possible. In

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certainly has advantages

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disadvantages.

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with, working in another country

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having a vacation is affordable thanks to technological improvements. The essential benefit is workers do not doubt the working process

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when they have a holiday with family. At any time and anywhere individuals might work using various types of applications,

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as Skype, Zoom, and Google Meet. All these resources make life better and easier.

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, in my country Kazakhstan, qualified specialists work in two different companies, which are located in two different countries. It assists them in developing their soft skills and getting a high working experience in their professions.

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, there are minor drawbacks of having freedom wot work and live abroad. The main disadvantage it creates distance between family members. Actually, every person wants to spend most of their time with close people, including friends, if a person chooses to live abroad

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that in foreign countries, at the beginning most individuals feel cultural shock and problems with the language barrier.

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, I suggest that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, despite some problems of living overseas thanks to improvements in technology and transport.

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Topic Vocabulary:

communication technology
transportation
advantages
disadvantages
freedom
work and live
development
increased job opportunities
flexibility
work-life balance
cultural exposure
diversity
economic growth
globalization
social isolation
loneliness
loss of community
sense of belonging
expensive cost of living
housing
strain on infrastructure
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