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Some people believe that culture will be ruined if is used to earn touris, revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In modern society, some individuals have a point of view that the proceeds of
tourism
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 will go toward destroying
culture
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.
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, others think that the sole route to protect the
culture
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 is
tourism
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. From my point of view
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tourism
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 will enhance and make the
culture
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 better.
Culture
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 will disappear and it will be a nostalgic thing in the future if people do not take notice of
culture
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.
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many exhibits were found by archaeologists and some antiques were bought with hundreds of millions of dollars. It can be touched and disturbed by humans. In some ,cases these things will be stolen and
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 leads to an insurmountable problem.
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, a wide of company tourists will attention and make use of scenery culturally to construct state-of-the-art skyscrapers, luxury resorts or sparkling hotel systems. All of the actions will attention to
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 and make the
culture
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 more and more pointless. Alternatively, the
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 sector plays a great deal in preventing fragile antiques and plays a main role in ambitious
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 .
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 with, selling souvenirs to visitors caused immense revenue for local communities and encouraged them to protect national heritage like icons for the area.
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, Bat Trang Pottery Village is one of the reputed attractions in Vietnam, where local people teach them how to make clay become flower vases, dishes, and bowls.
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, it will aid the local handicrafts and promote cultural values. I believe that
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 to advertising leads to prevalent to many travellers and the beneficial will fire for the government from different countries.
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, both sides have their own positive and negative view.
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, I will accept that the tourist industry can contribute knowledge to society and the development of civilization to satisfy the cutting-edge world.
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